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Posted by harrypotterfan200 at 10:26 AM on March 31, 2008

Chapters 1-6 are now finished for my novel, "A Changing Path". Here is a short part which is is the second chapter:

 ?I?m picking this room!? Cambria yelled from the upper part of the house, ?It?s the bigger of the two!?

?That is unfair!? moaned Marcus, who was standing beside her ?I always have a smaller room?

?I claimed it first, besides, the other room is still nice, and it has a balcony. Here, let me show you.? Cambria walked down the bare corridor and turned to the right at the end of it. Marcus followed her. The room wasn?t that small, but most of the space was taken up by a large walk-in wardrobe. The walls, like every wall in the house, were white. There was one big window in the room, which led to a small balcony. Cambria opened the door and stepped outside.

?See,? she said ?it?s still a good room?

?Fine? Marcus grumbled, and walked away.

The afternoon passed quickly while the workers moved the furniture into the new house. The rooms had all been claimed. The small room next to the entrance would be Edwin?s study, and Cambria and Marcus?s rooms would be on the third floor. The room at the top of the house, on the fourth floor would be fitted with a computer, and the room directly below it would be Edwin and Marian?s room. With so much to unpack, Cambria and Marcus got bored a few times. They wandered down the garden path toward the street and the removal truck, waiting for their belongings to come out.

I hope you like it, so far, and I will be posting short extracts from each chapter now, but not the whole chapter smile

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5 Comments

Reply pwnagee
03:29 AM on April 16, 2008
ammm not too bad!<img alt="roll" src="http://images.freewebs.com/Images/Smilies/Round/rolleyes.gif
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Reply suulja_grl1
06:31 PM on April 30, 2008
omg thats so good im kind of a writer too i want to write a novel that i am currently writing as well
Reply rose60
03:48 PM on May 09, 2008
i love ure extract from ure novel when will it hit the shops
Reply rose60
03:48 PM on May 09, 2008
i love ure extract from ure novel when will it hit the shops
Reply Artitssmiles
11:42 AM on February 22, 2009
It's not bad, there are some typos however that you should take care of and the grammar in some places needs to be looked over. But all in all I would be interested in reading more of your writings smile
Very well done.

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